Once we looked at all the footage we had on the scenes with dialogue we noticed that they seemed really staged. Therefore we felt the need to change this and this meant changing the script slightly:
*Shots of scenery/setting*
*Character 1 walks into the dark alleyway and meets Character 2*
*Hands over the goods*
Character 1: "sorry I'm late"
*Character 2 shakes head in disappointment*
*Character 1 walks away*
Character 2: "If you get caught... you don't know who I am"
*Character 1 is at the station about to depart*
*Calls Character 2 on his phone*
Character 1: "Hello? ... I don't think I can do this..."
*Phone Call is ended*
*A security officer enters (character 3)*
Character 3: "Oi!"
*Character 1 runs out of the scene and the camera cuts*
This new script is more of a natural conversation between two people which makes it appear more realistic in our film opening.