Thursday 17 November 2016

Film Pitch Feedback

 
 
Clear genre, themes, message?
Drama
Struggles and hard life - try to help people aim high and not be put down.
Crime, drug smuggling, turning life around
forgiveness
Justice 
what is the narrative?
Drugs and airport
train
crime and smuggling
What drugs?
first crime even committed
Realistic Storyline. 
Interesting character?
the main characters
just close up
Italian characters
 
The target audience?
Young people
uneducated
teenagers and adults
15+
Institution
low budget
social media (free)
enigma codes
Independent production company
 
Any comments about the film, would you watch it, it is doable and interesting?
Yes because it is raw and hard hitting- you want to know what happens.
yes again building intensity essential to build up tension. Close ups so you want to know what he's doing. Concentrate on mise en scene.
Opening scene looks capable of being done at a high standard and realistic.